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SuperLightning ~火 FIRE BREATHER 火~
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| Subject: Re: SL's Fan Character Do's and Don'ts.. Mon Sep 13, 2010 2:25 am | |
| - Rhys the Hedgehog wrote:
- Other than that, my character's original?
Yeah i guess. - Sceinic wrote:
- What about miiiiiiine? *brick'd*
Your character? Scenic is fine. - Kamisori Razor Hedgehog wrote:
- ok cool.I guess. and i ususally never see ice powers. im going to make a detailed description of razor in the character section.
Ice powers are quite common, especially around females. | |
| | | GoldenHedgehog360 Sonic World Fan
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| Subject: Re: SL's Fan Character Do's and Don'ts.. Mon Sep 13, 2010 7:45 am | |
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| | | Rhys the Porcupine Legendary Member
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| Subject: Re: SL's Fan Character Do's and Don'ts.. Mon Sep 13, 2010 8:38 am | |
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| | | SuperLightning ~火 FIRE BREATHER 火~
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| Subject: Re: SL's Fan Character Do's and Don'ts.. Mon Sep 13, 2010 10:24 am | |
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| | | Nova X Super Member
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| Subject: Re: SL's Fan Character Do's and Don'ts.. Mon Sep 13, 2010 9:29 pm | |
| Nova's technically married to a diffrent version of Sonic rofl Coff These are popping up everywhere Nice though ;; j
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| | | Smash The Echidna Champion Of The Blitz
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| Subject: Re: SL's Fan Character Do's and Don'ts.. Mon Sep 13, 2010 10:43 pm | |
| - SuperLightning wrote:
- Kamisori Razor Hedgehog wrote:
- ok cool.I guess. and i ususally never see ice powers. im going to make a detailed description of razor in the character section.
Ice powers are quite common, especially around females. Come to think of it, I rarely see any males with Ice Powers these days. | |
| | | Bob Distant Traveler
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| Subject: Re: SL's Fan Character Do's and Don'ts.. Tue Sep 14, 2010 5:56 am | |
| - Novastar wrote:
Nova's technically married to a diffrent version of Sonic rofl Coff These are popping up everywhere Nice though ;; j D: you're cheating on some different version of knuckles HOW DARE YOUand i thought that sonic had a broken leg and down syndrome | |
| | | SuperLightning ~火 FIRE BREATHER 火~
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| Subject: Re: SL's Fan Character Do's and Don'ts.. Tue Sep 14, 2010 7:18 am | |
| - Smash The Echidna wrote:
- SuperLightning wrote:
- Kamisori Razor Hedgehog wrote:
- ok cool.I guess. and i ususally never see ice powers. im going to make a detailed description of razor in the character section.
Ice powers are quite common, especially around females. Come to think of it, I rarely see any males with Ice Powers these days. Because ice is like water, water flows, its beautiful and its elegant...shiny... Females are usualy associated with it. Except females who use ice usually have a more harsh side, usually a stronger female, though usually quiet. usually due to the sharpness of ice. Elements usually take over personality. which if isn't intended should be avoided. Fire - Active, usually strong and all business and when they arent they have a crude sense of humor. Water - usually nice, quiet maybe even sad. Electric - usually overexcited and active. usually the funnest to be around, though can get annoying. Psychic - usually has some kind of mental isue, quiet, and has a sadistic view of life. can be cruel. Physical and Ground - Stubborn, but loyal. usually has a very dry sense of humor and is definatley all business Ice - quiet, powerful, and sometimes cruel, though needed within reason Light - these characters are usually very good looking, and nothing is wrong with them. usually very innocent, though can turn into da big hero anytime. Dark - These characters aren't always bad, though they are usualy quiet...sad...angry..one might say emo. can be of any appearance. All Powerful - usually uses short, mysterious sentences. never really gets to the point and would rather get answers out of the asker then tell them. usually speaks in riddles. usually wise and knows the fine parts of life and what to do always. usually old. and if not old, usually a Mary Sue or some kind of angel girl, who cant do much nowadays, cause shes usually dead, or is unwilling to do wrong displays of his/her power. My character Blizz happens to have ice so lol. | |
| | | Rhys the Porcupine Legendary Member
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| Subject: Re: SL's Fan Character Do's and Don'ts.. Tue Sep 14, 2010 7:43 am | |
| Wow, you're right. The element could reflect on their personality. Mine doesn't have an element and I'm sure I wouldn't give him. | |
| | | SuperLightning ~火 FIRE BREATHER 火~
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| Subject: Re: SL's Fan Character Do's and Don'ts.. Tue Sep 14, 2010 7:57 am | |
| - Rhys the Hedgehog wrote:
- Wow, you're right. The element could reflect on their personality. Mine doesn't have an element and I'm sure I wouldn't give him.
Interesting. what powerz does he have? | |
| | | Rhys the Porcupine Legendary Member
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| Subject: Re: SL's Fan Character Do's and Don'ts.. Tue Sep 14, 2010 8:05 am | |
| - SuperLightning wrote:
- Rhys the Hedgehog wrote:
- Wow, you're right. The element could reflect on their personality. Mine doesn't have an element and I'm sure I wouldn't give him.
Interesting. what powerz does he have? This is pretty much all I have. It isn't much but I wouldn't want to give him too many abilities. Abilities: 50% faster than Amy, but 20% slower than Sonic, can talk to and feel others with his mind, heal sadness or pain by focusing his mind and putting his hand on their forehead, unleash a aqua colored explosive wave called Aqua Wave, shoot a blue energy blast from hands called Blue Light, vanish with a blue flash and reappear near an enemy ready to strike, and is the wielder of the legendary Eclipse keyblade. | |
| | | SuperLightning ~火 FIRE BREATHER 火~
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| Subject: Re: SL's Fan Character Do's and Don'ts.. Tue Sep 14, 2010 8:07 am | |
| - Rhys the Hedgehog wrote:
- SuperLightning wrote:
- Rhys the Hedgehog wrote:
- Wow, you're right. The element could reflect on their personality. Mine doesn't have an element and I'm sure I wouldn't give him.
Interesting. what powerz does he have? This is pretty much all I have. It isn't much but I wouldn't want to give him too many abilities.
Abilities: 50% faster than Amy, but 20% slower than Sonic, can talk to and feel others with his mind, heal sadness or pain by focusing his mind and putting his hand on their forehead, unleash a aqua colored explosive wave called Aqua Wave, shoot a blue energy blast from hands called Blue Light, vanish with a blue flash and reappear near an enemy ready to strike, and is the wielder of the legendary Eclipse keyblade.
The only generic part about that is the keyblade. What a healthy character you have. | |
| | | Rhys the Porcupine Legendary Member
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| Subject: Re: SL's Fan Character Do's and Don'ts.. Tue Sep 14, 2010 8:11 am | |
| - SuperLightning wrote:
- Rhys the Hedgehog wrote:
- SuperLightning wrote:
- Rhys the Hedgehog wrote:
- Wow, you're right. The element could reflect on their personality. Mine doesn't have an element and I'm sure I wouldn't give him.
Interesting. what powerz does he have? This is pretty much all I have. It isn't much but I wouldn't want to give him too many abilities.
Abilities: 50% faster than Amy, but 20% slower than Sonic, can talk to and feel others with his mind, heal sadness or pain by focusing his mind and putting his hand on their forehead, unleash a aqua colored explosive wave called Aqua Wave, shoot a blue energy blast from hands called Blue Light, vanish with a blue flash and reappear near an enemy ready to strike, and is the wielder of the legendary Eclipse keyblade.
The only generic part about that is the keyblade.
What a healthy character you have. Thanks SL. | |
| | | angry Toilet Princess
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| Subject: Re: SL's Fan Character Do's and Don'ts.. Tue Sep 14, 2010 9:08 am | |
| I'd probably enter Speedy in your test as well, but all he can really do is use fire, and that is generic beyond words.
I plan to also try and do something original with his power like you did. | |
| | | GoldenHedgehog360 Sonic World Fan
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| Subject: Re: SL's Fan Character Do's and Don'ts.. Tue Sep 14, 2010 9:17 am | |
| - SuperLightning wrote:
- Smash The Echidna wrote:
- SuperLightning wrote:
- Kamisori Razor Hedgehog wrote:
- ok cool.I guess. and i ususally never see ice powers. im going to make a detailed description of razor in the character section.
Ice powers are quite common, especially around females. Come to think of it, I rarely see any males with Ice Powers these days. Because ice is like water, water flows, its beautiful and its elegant...shiny... Females are usualy associated with it.
Except females who use ice usually have a more harsh side, usually a stronger female, though usually quiet. usually due to the sharpness of ice.
Elements usually take over personality. which if isn't intended should be avoided.
Fire - Active, usually strong and all business and when they arent they have a crude sense of humor.
Water - usually nice, quiet maybe even sad.
Electric - usually overexcited and active. usually the funnest to be around, though can get annoying.
Psychic - usually has some kind of mental isue, quiet, and has a sadistic view of life. can be cruel.
Physical and Ground - Stubborn, but loyal. usually has a very dry sense of humor and is definatley all business
Ice - quiet, powerful, and sometimes cruel, though needed within reason
Light - these characters are usually very good looking, and nothing is wrong with them. usually very innocent, though can turn into da big hero anytime.
Dark - These characters aren't always bad, though they are usualy quiet...sad...angry..one might say emo. can be of any appearance.
All Powerful - usually uses short, mysterious sentences. never really gets to the point and would rather get answers out of the asker then tell them. usually speaks in riddles. usually wise and knows the fine parts of life and what to do always. usually old. and if not old, usually a Mary Sue or some kind of angel girl, who cant do much nowadays, cause shes usually dead, or is unwilling to do wrong displays of his/her power.
My character Blizz happens to have ice so lol. Funny, my female character is the physically strongest out of a team of males. | |
| | | SuperLightning ~火 FIRE BREATHER 火~
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| Subject: Re: SL's Fan Character Do's and Don'ts.. Tue Sep 14, 2010 9:32 am | |
| kay. please remember that the above are just overused steryotypes on how type matches personality.
Now, there is a difference. maybe the darkness MADE someone go evil or emo. | |
| | | angry Toilet Princess
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| Subject: Re: SL's Fan Character Do's and Don'ts.. Tue Sep 14, 2010 9:48 am | |
| That actually is usually the case in my experience. | |
| | | GoldenHedgehog360 Sonic World Fan
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| Subject: Re: SL's Fan Character Do's and Don'ts.. Tue Sep 14, 2010 9:50 am | |
| In my case, it makes the main villain go even crazier. | |
| | | Nova X Super Member
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| Subject: Re: SL's Fan Character Do's and Don'ts.. Tue Sep 14, 2010 10:24 am | |
| - Supersonic84 wrote:
- Novastar wrote:
Nova's technically married to a diffrent version of Sonic rofl Coff These are popping up everywhere Nice though ;; j
D: you're cheating on some different version of knuckles
HOW DARE YOU
and i thought that sonic had a broken leg and down syndrome ... Thats HH's Sonic I have completely diffrent one that I dismembered into being a Sky Kingdom dude Because turning a Original-ish Character completely unoriginal is fun and kills boredom dohoho c: /mauled | |
| | | Eliwood The Tablet Artist
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| Subject: Re: SL's Fan Character Do's and Don'ts.. Tue Sep 14, 2010 7:33 pm | |
| - Spoiler:
Ignition SurlafireName:Ignition Species:Hedgehog (Now isn't THAT overused these days) Age:16 Gender:MaleDescription:not accurate, see picture below. Personality:He is a great guy who likes to hang out with others and treats most people with respect. Sometimes he would joke around to try and lighten up a situation. Abilities:He can control fire, but that requires energy to do so, so he cannot just use it infinitely. Super form:Burning, Inferno, and Incendia Ignition. He uses his inside energy to use his super forms. He can go any form whenever. But if he uses up too much energy, it'll make him faint. (remind you of a certain anime featuring balls?) Backstory:In a world of the elements, everyone has them. From powerful to weak, the power of the elements are with all. Regardless of the element that that person possesses, they always have one thing in common, and that's energy. They all contain energy, and that's what fuels most of the elements that they have. One thing that makes this energy so special, is that it can be transferred at all times, or created depending on the skill and practice of the person. The main character of this story is Ignition, and he has the power of fire, a power with its strengths and weaknesses. For instance, ice and water destroy fire, however, fire destroys grass and earth. The owner of this element is none other than our main character, Flame. He lives in an area which is kept warm most of the time, but that's only one of the smaller areas of this world. There are large, minor, and normal sectors of land for every element. Large is somewhat of a Utopia, and it is very large, and millions of people live there, it is estimated that over 10 million live there. A Minor area, is almost that in relation to a neighborhood on planet Earth, where usually only thousands live. In a normal area, it can consist of either thousands or millions, but it is always smaller than the other types. There is also a special type of land, and that is known as the general area, and that's basically everywhere else that isn't a large, small, or normal area. However, there are some large areas that are general, where everyone gets a long. Depending on the type of element, some people block those people off from coming into their type of area... for instance, a person of ice is usually not allowed to come into a fire area, because their power can ruin the type of ecosystem that they normally live in. However, not all areas are this strict, in fact, some let just about anyone in, and these are probably the best group around. This is the world that our character Flame lives in, he lives in this world, he lives in this land, and it's his time to go out and have all the adventures he desires. Side:Mostly good. Friends:Alexa, Psyche, Patricia, Petunia, and Inigis (Friends with Main Sonic Characters? Do you know how generic that is?) (And on a side note, these are characters that I haven't posted up and are currently working on) Enemies:Umbrus (read above comment of other characters Likes:Treating people equally. Eating pizza. Helping others. (there are more things he likes and dislikes, but I've just copy/pasted this from another forum. I honestly am starting to find fan characters slightly silly for some reason) Dislikes:People who threaten him. Those who hurt others. (read above comment) Special Abilities:By using some of his energy, he can use an Icy flame, which burns with coldness. If he puts enough energy into the ground, he can pull up something out of the ground into whatever shape he wants it to be (kinda like alchemy). If he combines water with fire, he sends out a mist which can blind his opponent. When combining electricity with fire, a blast of fire is shot at the speed of light which shocks and burns whoever he attacks. Extra Info:His super forms have a strange way of working and now it's time you knew how. His super forms run on energy, which means he can be any form he wants to be at anytime, but it will cost him energy. If he becomes burning mode, he burns more energy than if he were in his regular form. His Inferno mode, he burns up a lot more energy than Burning. And with Incendia mode, he burns up a whole lot of energy which can result in making him faint if he doesn't watch how much energy he has. Ignition's first name when he was first created was "Flame Sonic", so you automatically know that he was a recolor right of the bat. But he had gone through a lot of changes through that time, sure, it took 4 years to get where he is today, but at least it was worth the wait. Back when he used to have super forms like Sonic, he had his own Chaos gems, called Chaos Crystals, which were 7 times more powerful than chaos emeralds. The reason why Chaos Crystals were more powerful than the Chaos Emerald, was because it had spent more time in the Chaos Fountain which played an important part in his comic "Chaos Crystals". The comic "Chaos Crystals" was a story based on Flame Sonic and for some reason, everyone liked it, even though it was a crappy comic. It had been remade at least 5 times and none of them were as good as the original. The new comic being made (If it is made), will be based off his new backstory and will be a local comic, which means no one here will see it. Flame once had a brother named "Flame Shadow". Oh please, that just screamed recolor just like "Flame Sonic". He had later been renamed to Jeff...but meh, he just kinda died off and no longer exists. Picture of Ignition: Any other mentioning of "Flame" was supposed to be reworded to "Ignition" because Flame is a very unoriginal name.
Go./ Go rate him now. Also, made a spoiler so it will save space. | |
| | | Bob Distant Traveler
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| Subject: Re: SL's Fan Character Do's and Don'ts.. Wed Sep 15, 2010 6:07 am | |
| - SuperLightning wrote:
- Rhys the Hedgehog wrote:
- SuperLightning wrote:
- Rhys the Hedgehog wrote:
- Wow, you're right. The element could reflect on their personality. Mine doesn't have an element and I'm sure I wouldn't give him.
Interesting. what powerz does he have? This is pretty much all I have. It isn't much but I wouldn't want to give him too many abilities.
Abilities: 50% faster than Amy, but 20% slower than Sonic, can talk to and feel others with his mind, heal sadness or pain by focusing his mind and putting his hand on their forehead, unleash a aqua colored explosive wave called Aqua Wave, shoot a blue energy blast from hands called Blue Light, vanish with a blue flash and reappear near an enemy ready to strike, and is the wielder of the legendary Eclipse keyblade.
The only generic part about that is the keyblade.
What a healthy character you have. D: plus it doesn't work because noruma screwed everyone's fan characters over with the keyblade ritual SO DENIED | |
| | | Razor Elite Member
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| Subject: Re: SL's Fan Character Do's and Don'ts.. Wed Sep 15, 2010 6:56 am | |
| Razor is about as fast as tails.He is the weilder of the legendary XStar sword (created on planet Meff) Cant use chaos abilities. Only because hes not powerful enough, but if the XStar has a chaos emerald inserted into it it gives the weilder chaos abilities not draining the energy of the emerald.Hes really skilled with his ice powers.He can make scultures,igloos,and other usefull stuff like knives,arrows,staffs.He really sticks out with a horn that hangs down but not like hair...its a horn.dosent really have much powers except ice and hes a master swordsman.
just a basic hedgehog :D | |
| | | SuperLightning ~火 FIRE BREATHER 火~
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| Subject: Re: SL's Fan Character Do's and Don'ts.. Wed Sep 15, 2010 8:04 am | |
| - Eliwood wrote:
- Spoiler:
Ignition SurlafireName:Ignition Species:Hedgehog (Now isn't THAT overused these days) Age:16 Gender:MaleDescription:not accurate, see picture below. Personality:He is a great guy who likes to hang out with others and treats most people with respect. Sometimes he would joke around to try and lighten up a situation. Abilities:He can control fire, but that requires energy to do so, so he cannot just use it infinitely. Super form:Burning, Inferno, and Incendia Ignition. He uses his inside energy to use his super forms. He can go any form whenever. But if he uses up too much energy, it'll make him faint. (remind you of a certain anime featuring balls?) Backstory:In a world of the elements, everyone has them. From powerful to weak, the power of the elements are with all. Regardless of the element that that person possesses, they always have one thing in common, and that's energy. They all contain energy, and that's what fuels most of the elements that they have. One thing that makes this energy so special, is that it can be transferred at all times, or created depending on the skill and practice of the person. The main character of this story is Ignition, and he has the power of fire, a power with its strengths and weaknesses. For instance, ice and water destroy fire, however, fire destroys grass and earth. The owner of this element is none other than our main character, Flame. He lives in an area which is kept warm most of the time, but that's only one of the smaller areas of this world. There are large, minor, and normal sectors of land for every element. Large is somewhat of a Utopia, and it is very large, and millions of people live there, it is estimated that over 10 million live there. A Minor area, is almost that in relation to a neighborhood on planet Earth, where usually only thousands live. In a normal area, it can consist of either thousands or millions, but it is always smaller than the other types. There is also a special type of land, and that is known as the general area, and that's basically everywhere else that isn't a large, small, or normal area. However, there are some large areas that are general, where everyone gets a long. Depending on the type of element, some people block those people off from coming into their type of area... for instance, a person of ice is usually not allowed to come into a fire area, because their power can ruin the type of ecosystem that they normally live in. However, not all areas are this strict, in fact, some let just about anyone in, and these are probably the best group around. This is the world that our character Flame lives in, he lives in this world, he lives in this land, and it's his time to go out and have all the adventures he desires. Side:Mostly good. Friends:Alexa, Psyche, Patricia, Petunia, and Inigis (Friends with Main Sonic Characters? Do you know how generic that is?) (And on a side note, these are characters that I haven't posted up and are currently working on) Enemies:Umbrus (read above comment of other characters Likes:Treating people equally. Eating pizza. Helping others. (there are more things he likes and dislikes, but I've just copy/pasted this from another forum. I honestly am starting to find fan characters slightly silly for some reason) Dislikes:People who threaten him. Those who hurt others. (read above comment) Special Abilities:By using some of his energy, he can use an Icy flame, which burns with coldness. If he puts enough energy into the ground, he can pull up something out of the ground into whatever shape he wants it to be (kinda like alchemy). If he combines water with fire, he sends out a mist which can blind his opponent. When combining electricity with fire, a blast of fire is shot at the speed of light which shocks and burns whoever he attacks. Extra Info:His super forms have a strange way of working and now it's time you knew how. His super forms run on energy, which means he can be any form he wants to be at anytime, but it will cost him energy. If he becomes burning mode, he burns more energy than if he were in his regular form. His Inferno mode, he burns up a lot more energy than Burning. And with Incendia mode, he burns up a whole lot of energy which can result in making him faint if he doesn't watch how much energy he has. Ignition's first name when he was first created was "Flame Sonic", so you automatically know that he was a recolor right of the bat. But he had gone through a lot of changes through that time, sure, it took 4 years to get where he is today, but at least it was worth the wait. Back when he used to have super forms like Sonic, he had his own Chaos gems, called Chaos Crystals, which were 7 times more powerful than chaos emeralds. The reason why Chaos Crystals were more powerful than the Chaos Emerald, was because it had spent more time in the Chaos Fountain which played an important part in his comic "Chaos Crystals". The comic "Chaos Crystals" was a story based on Flame Sonic and for some reason, everyone liked it, even though it was a crappy comic. It had been remade at least 5 times and none of them were as good as the original. The new comic being made (If it is made), will be based off his new backstory and will be a local comic, which means no one here will see it. Flame once had a brother named "Flame Shadow". Oh please, that just screamed recolor just like "Flame Sonic". He had later been renamed to Jeff...but meh, he just kinda died off and no longer exists. Picture of Ignition: Any other mentioning of "Flame" was supposed to be reworded to "Ignition" because Flame is a very unoriginal name.
Go./ Go rate him now.
Also, made a spoiler so it will save space. Actually not that bad. not great either. when designing a character work on hs weaknesses more than his powers. and everything generic you already pointed out, so i guess there isn't really MUCH i can say. http://www.katfeete.net/writing/marysue.html This should help you out mightly kindly for developing characters, - Kamisori Razor Hedgehog wrote:
- Razor is about as fast as tails.He is the weilder of the legendary XStar sword (created on planet Meff) Cant use chaos abilities. Only because hes not powerful enough, but if the XStar has a chaos emerald inserted into it it gives the weilder chaos abilities not draining the energy of the emerald.Hes really skilled with his ice powers.He can make scultures,igloos,and other usefull stuff like knives,arrows,staffs.He really sticks out with a horn that hangs down but not like hair...its a horn.dosent really have much powers except ice and hes a master swordsman.
just a basic hedgehog :D Hm. Actualy its not that bad. just the fact that your character shouldn't have a chaos emerald forever. once in a story is okay as long as it doesn't get in the way of the official charas. I would say you haven't really clinged to this character too much but have definatley made a near-healthy distance away from him. | |
| | | Razor Elite Member
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| Subject: Re: SL's Fan Character Do's and Don'ts.. Wed Sep 15, 2010 8:10 am | |
| yeah the chaos emerald he never has because hr gives them to his friends so he can find another! | |
| | | Moriah214 Super Member
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| Subject: Re: SL's Fan Character Do's and Don'ts.. Wed Sep 15, 2010 9:24 am | |
| I really hate how fire is my characters element. | |
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