Fancharacters

How....unoriginal.

Yeah, what Turbo said. You're gonna have to work on that a lot if you want a good character. In fact, I'm sorry, but that character is so unoriginal that you'd be better off just dropping him and making a new one. He can't be salvaged.

Irockz wrote:

Full Name: Metal Shadow
Nicknames: Metal
Age: N/A
Strengths: He gets lazers in his hands.
Weakness: losing the chaos emerald in his chest/
Description: Shadow, but metal :P. He has a chaos emerald powering him.
As seen in: WILL have been seen in Summer Vacation
Facts: He tries to kill Star a number of times.
Bios/Story: Robotnik was angry. Sonic defeated him yet again. So he ordered his robots to take a sample of a hedgehog. Shadow's DNA was the one took. Of course, it was not without the metal, so he used a sample of metal shadow's memory. It created metal shadow, who now knew sonic and shadow. Soon, he broke out of a test chamber and into the world... of course, tracking down star.

This is the most original character in this topic.

Actually, its not. Kung Fu Hedgehog is.

No, I'm sure it's the guidance system.

I was wondering if i can redo razor again because the last one was poopie. :/

Don't sit there wondering about it. Go ahead. There's no restrictions against that.

I should probably Update Him.

Name: Zatic

Abilities: Fire

Story: Zatic, Flew over the dark, lifeless, cold planet that he called serallia, and gave warmth to the planet. The planet thrived for thousands of years, and Zatic kept shelter in the largest mountain in the universe- Mount mobious. though he wasn't looking over serallia, he didn't have to. He was only really concerned about mobious, who were more techically advanced, but not by far. He also had to stay away from serallia, so they wouldnt know for sure that for sure he existed. untill he saw a ship flying over to Serallia. Zatic flew over and tried to stop the alien invasion from mobious, but he was stripped of his powers and casted down onto the Serallian Surface. From there on, he focused on one thing, and that was gaining his powers back, be he would gain them little by little over time, but still fighting against mobious's invasion.

Friends: Blizzard the Mink.

Likes : Fire, and Hamburgers.

Dislikes : Anyone from mobious, Coldness

Weapons : Celestial Robe (lost apoun power loss)

GoldenHedgehog360 wrote:

Full Name: Spark Yoshiro

Nicknames: Sparkstah, Sparky, Sparkie, Ace

Alias: Dante

Age:14

Gender: Male

Species: Hedgehog

Strengths: Aura Powers, Elemental Adaptation, Exceptionally smart and a great strategist

Weakness: Opposing element (such as spark using ice and opponent using fire),

Alliance: None (Nor good or evil)

Description: Silver/gray & black fur, 3 spikes (vertically flipped version of sonic's), Black and White Checkered Jacket, Blue and Black aura gloves, blue and black shoes, blue eyes

As seen in: Xtreme Isle

Bios/Story: Spark was born on a large Island hidden far out in the ocean known as Xtreme Isle. He was separated from his parents at birth due to unknown reasons. Spark was born naturally with aura powers (his ancestors were aura manipulators), but couldn't control them. He figured out this when he was fighting off pirates to protect the island, and ended up obliterating the entire fleet of pirates and also harming some innocent inhabitants. Spark then set out on a journey to control his aura powers by visiting the Seven Ancient Temples and obtaining the legendary artifacts left by his ancestors to enhance his abilities. Spark found in the first temple the legendary Aura gloves, which allowed Spark to completely control his aura abilities, as well as absorbing and stealing the elemental abilities of his opponents and/or surroundings. At the second temple, Spark found the Aura boots, which allowed him to teleport short distances and sense movements within a 30ft radius. Spark battled many monsters and enemies on his quest, and soon arrived to the 3rd temple. This temple wasn't like the others....there was a strange sense to it. Here Spark encountered the strangest thing....HIMSELF! Or so he thought. It was an Aura clone made by the temple when Spark entered. This temple was created to test what Spark had learned on his journey. Just when it seemed like he couldn't win, Spark absorbed his clone, ultimately having it become a part of him (a darker more berserk side). Soon after absorbing it, this side took over! The dark Spark went on a rampage destroying the temple do to it's angry reaction of having to share a body with his "good" side stating: "It's not fair!! I was immortal until this idiot absorbed me!!". The Dark Spark collapsed, and the normal Spark awoke. That other side of him contains Dark Aura, which is very dangerous and could disrupt Spark and corrupt him...forever. After this incident, Spark returned back to his home in Windmill Valley, but is preparing to travel, wondering what other adventure's await him.

NOTE: The Dark Spark only takes over when either:

1. Spark is corrupted by a strong emotion like Hate or Rage

2. Spark allows him to take over (Seeing as Dark Spark's power is twice his own).

Trivia: Spark was originally a yellow armadillo named Ace.
Spark's elemental adaptation ability is based on Model A's Copy ability from Megaman ZX Advent.
Xtreme Isle was originally named Seven Island (due to the Island having seven different parts)

Personality (#1 the normal spark): Relaxed, Lazy, Lives without a care in the world, loyal to his friends, sometimes goofy, Calm

Personality (#2 the dark spark): Heartless, Rude, Calmer than normal spark, Fiendish

BONUS:

Okay, I'm adding a story update.

Spark is actually a clone of Zetsepkuu, created by Phantom in hopes to harness the power of the last living Seraphian (Zetsepkuu's race was wiped out). However, the experiment failed, and Spark was out of control. Phantom attempted to seal him away, but Spark was too strong. Instead, Phantom sent him a distant planet known as Mobious. Upon crashing on an Island (Xtreme Island), Spark had lost all of his memories of being a clone, and Phantom's creation. While walking in a forest not too long after crashing, Phantom appeared in front of Spark, claiming to have answers to his past. Phantom lies to him (telling him his previous back story) and disappears. Spark then thinks he's the guardian of Xtreme Island, and sets off to protect it. Several months afterwords, word gets by Spark that a strong hero by the name of Zetsepkuu lived on Seven Island, a nearby Island. Spark went to Seven Island to challenge Zetsepkuu, but lost. Not long after this event, the "Demon King" Dante was fighting Zetsepkuu, and Zetsepkuu was losing. Spark appeared to stall Dante while Yami healed Zetsepkuu. Spark wasn't able to do much, but he did manage to damage Dante. After the fight, Spark returned to Xtreme Isle to keep protecting it. About a month later, Zetsepkuu and his younger brother Tobey departed into space. After Spark got word of this, he left Xtreme Isle to help protect Seven Island and Princess Yami. Not too long after that, Spark started having strange dreams surrounding his past and Zetsepkuu. Haunted by these dreams, Spark left into space to find the real truth about his past.

Not gonna reveal anymore due to even MORE spoilers in my story.

name:ripper

power time

speed 1000

attack 998

defense 0

special attack 2000

special defense 0

species: hedgehog

type: mainly angry

wepons: blades of time 2 double bladed swords wich turn into the chains of time wich are two bladed chains with infinite range


special attacks time slash, restart, time stop, time blast (a less developed time ripple blast),



last resort(ripper must be brought back to life after this) time ripple blast unblockable and very dangerous



backstory dont no give me some ideas ripper is neutral must have neutral story must include a mission of destroying his brother blackhole

pace


themesong not afraid emenem






alliances thunder tribe used to be, shawnee used to be, the resistance still is, deathbringers used to be, trainers still is (rippers still learning about his powers).




hes a work in progress

Needs a lot of work. A lot.

No it doesn't. It doesn't need any work. You can't fix a character like that.

hes still a work in progress

It doesn't matter. Everything you already have down about him is just...terrible. Sorry, but it is. I see no redeeming qualities of that character. Nothing makes sense.

Speedy the Hedgehog wrote:

It doesn't matter. Everything you already have down about him is just...terrible. Sorry, but it is. I see no redeeming qualities of that character. Nothing makes sense.

What Speedy said. You'd be better off to start fresh and do something different.

I'm assuming it's good, since I'm too lazy to read all of that crap.

Just posting this for teh lulz. And to safely say that I actually did something today.

Name: Marcel The Hedge-fox
Called: Marcel
Gender: Male
Species: Hedgehog/Fox Vampire
Age: Unknown. Appears as if he is 18.
Description: He has shoulder length black hair with purple highlights, black fur with hedgehog spikes on his back. Two long vampyric fangs and amber eyes, purple streaks near the tail tip, and a white muzzle. Attire consists of a dark red hooded jacket, beige cargo pants, gray sandals. (Gray boots for colder seasons.)
Personality: Mostly serious, though he has a kinder side to those close to him. Mostly temperate, but can be on edge when he has to feed.
Crush: Koal Maria Foxx (Novastar’s fc)
Weapons: Dual tyrennium war glaives that are very durable and conductive, allowing him to charge them with his power.
Element: None
Forms: Vampire Patriarch Form
Strengths: Physically strong and agile, to a near extreme extent. Possesses a healing power to recover from injuries. His immune system is strong, so he does not succumb to diseases and can resist all but the strongest of poisons. Senses are acute, and more in tune with his surroundings. Has mastered lightning and wind kensekkai.
Weaknesses: Certain divine forces can hit him hard. Lightning and wind can be disrupted by earth-based forces. Should he become devoid of blood, he will slowly slip into a coma which he will never awaken from.
Back story: (Will write this when I stop procrastinating.)

Eventually, somewhere down the road, I'll replace the poorly made and hastily thrown together description with a reference pic. Dunno when though.

Full Name: Magnus Laurence
Nicknames: Maggy (He hates it)
Age: Terribly old, preserved only from possessing his brother and every descendant of his down the line for several hundreds of years over a few different dimensions. He looks like he's in his early twenties.
Strengths: His blood is poisonous and there's a lot of it.
Weakness: He must feed or he will die, and every time he goes Full Blood, he loses his humanity.
Description: His fur is all black. His arm fur is red up to a little past his elbows and then fades to black near his shoulders. His leg fur doe the same slightly past his knees. His chest and stomach fur is red. He has leathery wings on his back that have black fur on them and dark red fur on the inside. His hands and feet have claws on them and his tail is pointed with a dark red tip. His eyes are bright red. His hair and spines are long and since his hair is spiky, it's hard to determine one from the other sometimes. He has long fangs on the top of his mouth and shorter fangs on the bottom. He has a scar on his neck and chest that is an Anglo Saxon rune for the letter F given to him when he was young by his father, marking him as a failure.

Facts: Because he is a blood demon he is beautiful forever and his eyes and singing voice can hypnotize if he utters the right incantations. He has only ever used these abilities on his wife to protect her, but can use them in battle should he need to. He also has an obscene amount of blood in his body and is capable of bleeding at will.
Bios/Story: Once he was the son of a rather poor man and the brother of said man's "only son". His father disowned him for being unable to bring home any money. His brother, however, was a successful man. Magnus made an agreement with a dying blood demon to become a blood demon himself to let his kind continue on. He then found his brother and possessed him for a number of years until he was on his death bed. He continued to go from son to son of his brothers and then to their sons for a long time and over many dimensions. Then, one of the descendants became aware of him and set him free. He then married a mortal woman and signed a soul contract that she would provide him blood, and he would keep her safe.

-deeply inhales, then blows the huge mass of dust off the topic-

Time to revive this thing.

Full Name: Sceinic the Fox Meterax
Nicknames: Scein, Brony (Don't ask.)
Age: 12
Strengths: Is bold, and stands up against anything, especially if it means protecting her friends or innocents. She holds ice powers due to her being created in a lab, and can summon a pair of long ice daggers to be used at her expense.
Weakness: Her sharp tongue sometimes gets herself and others into trouble. Being younger than most of the others she travels with, she lacks experience and is an easy target for enemies. She has an intense fear of heights. Also, she has a major weakness to Chaos Energy. Even small quantities could do large amounts of damage.
Description: She's a light purple fox with emerald eyes. She wears her hair in a ponytail; never down. She wears a tan cap that is worn sideways, the brim often covering part of her right eye, and the hat itself covering the tops of her eyes. Two long, red bangs stick out of the front of her hat, and tend to fall to the left side of her face. She has a single, plain purple tail, with no white fur on it. She wears a gray T-shirt with black sleeves and a happy face on the front. (The happy face is not always included.) Her jewelery of choice is a necklace with a silver, oval-shaped locket. She wears jean capris, and pastel-striped leggings. Her shoes are a black color with a white toe covering, with a green heel surrounded by a stripe of gray. Instead of full gloves, she wears light blue knuckle gloves with white openings for the fingers.
Bios/Story: (Not going into full detail here) Sceinic was created in a lab as a member of the Meterax army. She was given ice powers in the lab, and trained to use them ever since she was a tot. She was banished after refusing to kill an enemy with one leg. To read a more advanced bio, (even though it's old), see Sceinic's Backstory.

Wow. I didn't think ANYONE would do that at this rate.

Anyway, In case I haven't already posted this earlier, here's a link to each of my character's profiles.

Smash The Echidna
Pearl The Echidna
Splice The Hedgehog
Violet The Hedgehog
Kyle Tyris The Hedgehog
Keela Tyris The Hedgehog
Darkyle The Hedgehog
Thunder The Hedgehog
Lightning The Hedgehog
Electric The Hedgehog
Zap The Hedgehog
Gizmo The Cat
Kitty The Cat Chao
Light The Hero Chao
Crystal The Fox
Jessie Garnet The Fox
James Hunter The Fox
Amber The Cat
Cutter The Echidna
Razor The Tiger

--Unfinished

Clara The Hedgehog
Frost

--Missing a Page

Harry Hunter The Fox
Crash The Echidna
Diamond The Echidna
Micheal The Cat
Lina The Cat

Icicle
Kirbia (Needs a name change)
Arrow
Fist
Will
Shockwave Bolt
Princess Emerald
Typhoon
Breeze
Cyclone
Chip The Squirrel


Some may not get a page. The ones with pages are generally the more important ones, not counting the Kirby series ones. Few of them are non important.