The history of Daz the Hedgehog

One day the evil Dr. Robotnik (I like the name Robotnik better then Eggman) thought yet another evil scheme but this time he decided to try and clone the legendary Super Sonic. He managed to get at least 6 Chaos Emeralds and a DNA sample of Sonic the Hedgehog. His robotic servants warned Robotnik that it wouldn't work with out the 7th Chaos Emerald but Robotnik was too reckless and he started the cloning process. The machine started going crazy, Robotnik should have listened to his robotic servants and the machine exploded! Yet a being did walk out alive. It was a yellow Hedgehog with red scars on his quills by the name of "PROJECT: SUPER SONIC". Dr. Robotnik made several tests to see if "PROJECT: SUPER SONIC" was a match for the real Super Sonic but alas he was not. Robotnik through his failed expirement on the streets to die. "PROJECT: SUPER SONIC" was about to die of starvation but a mysterious green fox with 3 tails named Morgan who helps "PROJECT: SUPER SONIC" up and takes him to her house.

Morgan: What is your name?

PROJECT: SUPER SONIC: I'm not sure... I don't recall ever having a name...

Morgan ponders for a moment,

Morgan: What about... Daz?

PROJECT: SUPER SONIC: Daz? Why such an odd name?

Morgan: An odd name seems to fit such a dazzling Hedgehog!

PROJECT: SUPER SONIC: Yeah, yeah.. I like it!

And ever since that day Daz made a vow to get revenge on Dr. Robotnik if it was the last thing he ever did!

Interesting...So thats where Daz came from.

Yup! I made Morgan up too. She's a green fox with three tails.

Lol, you already said that in your previous post.

LOL sorry.

Daz the Hedgehog wrote:

One day the evil Dr. Robotnik (I like the name Robotnik better then Eggman)

Well Robotnik sounds more evil then Eggman.

they both sound dumb. :P

Eggman sounds dummer then Robotnik to me XD

i am the eggman! i got the master plan!

I am the Robotnik and I HAVE DA MAZTAR PLANZ! Yeah I see what your coming across here lol

Lol. I like them both as much.

*KONK*

So what do you guys think of my little story?

Well, It could use some work. When writing, It is best to stay away from the intro of "One day so and so was doing such and such" etc. !'s are frowned upon in writing stories. I generally only use them for emotion. It also was a bit rushed, making it pretty short.

I am still thinking it over lol

Yeah. Beware of the dreaded Writers Block.

Smash The Echidna wrote:

Yeah. Beware of the dreaded Writers Block.

Cursed block!

Pretty cool but he sounds a litle too powerful.

Nah he is as powerful as any other Hedgehog. The only reason Daz is a failed experiment is because he is no where close as strong as Super Sonic.