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PostSubject: Star the Hedgehog: THE EPIC RPG OF CHEESE   Star the Hedgehog: THE EPIC RPG OF CHEESE EmptyTue Sep 14, 2010 10:54 am

(No, that is not the title of the rpg)

Story:
Star the hedgehog is a hedgehog who wakes up on the beach, not knowing anything about himself, except for his name. He explores through the city, meeting new friends/allies and some enemies/rivals. He eventually finds a purple hedgehog, named Light, claims that he is a Space Warlord from planet Zorklon, and puts up a good fight with Star. Unfortunately, Star wasn't paying attention, and got smacked in the back of the head. Light captured him, and unleashes chaos on the city. In Light's space station, Star meets up with Daniel the Hedgehog, who was disguised as a guard. They break out of the space station and flee to the city, Astrova. To avenge all of the lives lost, Star teams up with Glass the Hedgehog, to take down Light, once and for all.

Characters!:
-More characters are being made, so stay tuned!-

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Star The Hedgehog
Whenever he eats, he gets stronger for unknown reasons, and is the main character.

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Glass The Hedgehog
He is Star's best friend, and has the power to turn transparent. (That's why he's called Glass)

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Light The Hedgehog
Nothing is known about him. He's the main bad-guy in the game, and a pain in the butt.

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Daniel The Hedgehog
He is the "Brother" of Star The Hedgehog. He claims that they are brothers, but it's still unknown.

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Blaster The Armadillo
He is Daniel's friend, and also a very strong fighter

Star the Hedgehog: THE EPIC RPG OF CHEESE Razor_10
Razor The Hedgehog
Another good friend of Daniel and Star.

Star the Hedgehog: THE EPIC RPG OF CHEESE Glaze_10
Glaze The Hedgehog
She is Star's best friend. Everything about her is unknown, except for her name.

I am still working on everything for this game, so it will change every few days.


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PostSubject: Re: Star the Hedgehog: THE EPIC RPG OF CHEESE   Star the Hedgehog: THE EPIC RPG OF CHEESE EmptyTue Sep 14, 2010 10:58 am

Two things:

Is that seriously going to be the RPG's name? I mean, come on.

Why is that last guy in underwear?
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Speedy the Hedgehog wrote:
Two things:

Is that seriously going to be the RPG's name? I mean, come on.

Why is that last guy in underwear?
1. No, I'm not calling it that. =3 I just felt like adding that, for the fun of it.

2. They're shorts. DX
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PostSubject: Re: Star the Hedgehog: THE EPIC RPG OF CHEESE   Star the Hedgehog: THE EPIC RPG OF CHEESE EmptyTue Sep 14, 2010 12:28 pm

I'm sorry, but those are just too short to be shorts.
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Silly Speedy, there's a such thing as short shorts. And the story could use a lot of work, considering that, well, the bad guy randomly kidnaps Star and destroys the city for no reason.
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PostSubject: Re: Star the Hedgehog: THE EPIC RPG OF CHEESE   Star the Hedgehog: THE EPIC RPG OF CHEESE EmptyTue Sep 14, 2010 2:13 pm

I know there's a thing as short shorts. I said they're too short.
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Okay then, they're short short shorts.
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GoldenHedgehog360 wrote:
Silly Speedy, there's a such thing as short shorts. And the story could use a lot of work, considering that, well, the bad guy randomly kidnaps Star and destroys the city for no reason.
Eh, good point. I'll work on that. =) Btw, I allready have 2 new characters being worked on. I\'m happy
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Star2-D2 wrote:
Story:
Star the hedgehog is a hedgehog (Duh) who randomly wakes up on the beach, one day, not knowing anything about himself, exept for his name. He explores through the city, meeting new friends/allies and some enemies/rivals. He eventually finds a purple hedgehog, named Light, claims that he is a Space Warlord from planet Zorklon, and puts up a good fight with Star. Unfortunately, Star wasn't paying attention, and got kidnaped by star. Then, Light blew up the whole city! Fortuately, one of Light's guards let him go, (He is a very kind guy! =P) and he flees to the city, Astrova. To avenge all of the lives lost, Star teams up with Glass the Hedgehog, to take down Light, once and for all.

Really? If i kidnapped myself and held a randsom i'd be freaking rich.

I know that was a typo but yeah.

Also the story seems to explain...well not very much on why the hell he would even attack them

and whenever he eats he gets stronger? >.> Thisbetterbexplained,

Other then that the story is okay i guess. but a lot is left unexplained and that is the flaw of it.

I know you're still working on it so okay..

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SuperLightning wrote:
Star2-D2 wrote:
Story:
Star the hedgehog is a hedgehog (Duh) who randomly wakes up on the beach, one day, not knowing anything about himself, exept for his name. He explores through the city, meeting new friends/allies and some enemies/rivals. He eventually finds a purple hedgehog, named Light, claims that he is a Space Warlord from planet Zorklon, and puts up a good fight with Star. Unfortunately, Star wasn't paying attention, and got kidnaped by star. Then, Light blew up the whole city! Fortuately, one of Light's guards let him go, (He is a very kind guy! =P) and he flees to the city, Astrova. To avenge all of the lives lost, Star teams up with Glass the Hedgehog, to take down Light, once and for all.

Really? If i kidnapped myself and held a randsom i'd be freaking rich.

I know that was a typo but yeah.

Also the story seems to explain...well not very much on why the hell he would even attack them

and whenever he eats he gets stronger? >.> Thisbetterbexplained,

Other then that the story is okay i guess. but a lot is left unexplained and that is the flaw of it.

I know you're still working on it so okay..

Thanks for pointing that out. Anyway, I added a new char, Blaster the Armadillo.
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i didnt understaand it at all. you should put razor in :D as an friend
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Kamisori Razor Hedgehog wrote:
i didnt understaand it at all. you should put razor in :D as an friend
Well, one thing.
Can you have 2 Razors, because in Furry Dollmaker, they don't have just one thing. They have 2, and 3. D=
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i think the eating to get stronger could be a good mechanic

like popeye with spinach
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i think the eating to get stronger could be a good mechanic

like popeye with spinach

I will gladly pay you tuesday for a hamburger today.
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okay


it's tuesday i want my money
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okay


it's tuesday i want my money

I dont have it.

and you'll nevar get it.
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D:


and something with ontopicness

glass power is pretty stupid

i don't see what good it will do but burn ants
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Supersonic84 wrote:
D:


and something with ontopicness

glass power is pretty stupid

i don't see what good it will do but burn ants

He can turn invisible with em
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ah well transparent isn't exactly invisible
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Supersonic84 wrote:
ah well transparent isn't exactly invisible
yeah. ur right actually.
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Added Razor and Blaster have been added.
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Why is the armadillo a hedgehog chamelon hybrid
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Why is the armadillo a hedgehog chamelon hybrid
I don't know.... Shocked
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Star2-D2 wrote:
Added Razor and Blaster have been added.


in razor you mean radical right?
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Speedy the Hedgehog wrote:
Why is that last guy in underwear?

Its a speedo.
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