| Sceinic's NEW poetry | |
|
+2Rhys the Porcupine PikaScein 6 posters |
Author | Message |
---|
PikaScein Adventurer
Registration date : 2009-06-13 Number of posts : 1635 Age : 25 Location : In my current location. Current Mood : Tired x-x Fun Quote : Do not walk behind me, for I may not lead. Do not walk ahead of me, for I may not follow. Do not walk beside me either. Just pretty much leave me alone. Warning Level :
| Subject: Sceinic's NEW poetry Sat Aug 21, 2010 6:37 pm | |
| Alone in the snow Though I relish the cold, It's not the best To walk alone in the wind, with little rest. Trudging through with no one to hold. Even I cannot forever stand the cold.
For once in my life, I wished for heat. Or another person, to share my defeat The teardrops froze to my face and I soon became rooted in place
As the storm ended, and night became dawn, I stirred and let out a feeble yawn. The snow had melted, and left behind... Dew laden grass, sparkling in the cold, dawn sun.
This poem was based on an adventure of Sceinic's, the one time in her life she wished the snow would go away and it would become warmer.
Rhyme Scheme: AA, BB, AA, BB, AA, BB, AA, BC
Friends forever Glace
The young silvery kitsune Jumped into the air But sprained her knee
Sceinic came over to help but Glace declined, and got up herself.
She then splashed her, and Sceinic splashed back, It was quite a sight, I concour.
When the sun set, and the day came to end.. The two waved goodbye and parted ways again.
Rhyme scheme: ABA, ABA, ABA, ABA
Comet
Sceinic walked with the group With a troubled look on her face. The time was coming, they would have to defeat the meterax.
Comet stopped and turned around. To face the young fox, Face also a frown.
Sceinic tried to forget her worries but couldn't if she tried. So she grabbed Comet's saber, and jumped into the trees.
Comet laughed and sped after her, the two practically riding the breeze (while orbit and glace wondered where they had gone)
When he finally caught up, Comet grabbed his saber and pushed her into the mud below.
Though the fun ended when the others caught up. Laughing at the sight of a hedgehog covered in twigs and leaves, and a fox covered in dirt and mud.
Rhyme Scheme: Freeverse
Orbit
Sceinic sighed. With Glace and Comet gone, Orbit was left by her side.
He crossed his arms and was silent until Sceinic got her way..... and grabbed his arm and flung him into a bush.
Orbit growled and charged after her. But Sceinic was too evasive. Dodging pipes and poles (which Orbit would keep running into)
She took a look back, and to her surprise... Orbit was laughing and for once, having the time of his live.
So when Comet and Glace returned. and asked the two what they had done. Sceinic replied simply: Not much and Orbit was asleep
These three poems are based on actual roleplays Sceinic and her friends had. Orbit and Glace aren't the best at roleplaying, so these where the best I could find. | |
|
| |
Rhys the Porcupine Legendary Member
Registration date : 2010-01-27 Number of posts : 3704 Age : 29 Location : Tree house Current Mood : Happy Fun Quote : I never give up, no matter what happens! Warning Level :
| Subject: Re: Sceinic's NEW poetry Sat Aug 21, 2010 8:34 pm | |
| That's pretty good Sceinic. | |
|
| |
PikaScein Adventurer
Registration date : 2009-06-13 Number of posts : 1635 Age : 25 Location : In my current location. Current Mood : Tired x-x Fun Quote : Do not walk behind me, for I may not lead. Do not walk ahead of me, for I may not follow. Do not walk beside me either. Just pretty much leave me alone. Warning Level :
| Subject: Re: Sceinic's NEW poetry Sat Aug 21, 2010 8:34 pm | |
| Thanks. I was groggy when I wrote them, though, X.x | |
|
| |
Rhys the Porcupine Legendary Member
Registration date : 2010-01-27 Number of posts : 3704 Age : 29 Location : Tree house Current Mood : Happy Fun Quote : I never give up, no matter what happens! Warning Level :
| Subject: Re: Sceinic's NEW poetry Sat Aug 21, 2010 8:40 pm | |
| - Sceinic wrote:
- Thanks. I was groggy when I wrote them, though, X.x
You go through different emotions when you write something that's emotional. | |
|
| |
angry Toilet Princess
Registration date : 2008-12-16 Number of posts : 3214 Age : 2023 Location : Wouldn't you like to know... Current Mood : See, I might have had a mood. IF, I were just any old dude. Fun Quote : As if. Warning Level :
| Subject: Re: Sceinic's NEW poetry Sun Aug 22, 2010 4:21 am | |
| There wasn't really a need to make this new topic. You could have just bumped the old one. | |
|
| |
SuperLightning ~火 FIRE BREATHER 火~
Registration date : 2009-05-26 Number of posts : 4098 Age : 28 Location : Ohio. Current Mood : Why do you need to know? creeper. Fun Quote : Can't say slaughter without laughter! Warning Level :
| Subject: Re: Sceinic's NEW poetry Sun Aug 22, 2010 4:27 am | |
| Kinda depends though. I was thinking of making a new art topic to get away from my crappy old art. | |
|
| |
GoldenHedgehog360 Sonic World Fan
Registration date : 2010-03-28 Number of posts : 2151 Age : 27 Location : Little Planet Current Mood : I dunno. Warning Level :
| Subject: Re: Sceinic's NEW poetry Sun Aug 22, 2010 5:40 am | |
| - SuperLightning wrote:
- Kinda depends though. I was thinking of making a new art topic to get away from my crappy old art.
^ I did that as well. | |
|
| |
angry Toilet Princess
Registration date : 2008-12-16 Number of posts : 3214 Age : 2023 Location : Wouldn't you like to know... Current Mood : See, I might have had a mood. IF, I were just any old dude. Fun Quote : As if. Warning Level :
| Subject: Re: Sceinic's NEW poetry Sun Aug 22, 2010 6:55 am | |
| Well, if you guys don't mind, I could just delete your old topics. | |
|
| |
PikaScein Adventurer
Registration date : 2009-06-13 Number of posts : 1635 Age : 25 Location : In my current location. Current Mood : Tired x-x Fun Quote : Do not walk behind me, for I may not lead. Do not walk ahead of me, for I may not follow. Do not walk beside me either. Just pretty much leave me alone. Warning Level :
| Subject: Re: Sceinic's NEW poetry Sun Aug 22, 2010 7:00 am | |
| I would like that, thank you. Now how do you guys like my poetry? | |
|
| |
GoldenHedgehog360 Sonic World Fan
Registration date : 2010-03-28 Number of posts : 2151 Age : 27 Location : Little Planet Current Mood : I dunno. Warning Level :
| Subject: Re: Sceinic's NEW poetry Sun Aug 22, 2010 7:20 am | |
| - Speedy the Hedgehog wrote:
- Well, if you guys don't mind, I could just delete your old topics.
Please do. | |
|
| |
Rhys the Porcupine Legendary Member
Registration date : 2010-01-27 Number of posts : 3704 Age : 29 Location : Tree house Current Mood : Happy Fun Quote : I never give up, no matter what happens! Warning Level :
| Subject: Re: Sceinic's NEW poetry Sun Aug 22, 2010 7:46 am | |
| It's great Sceinic. You should do more. | |
|
| |
PikaScein Adventurer
Registration date : 2009-06-13 Number of posts : 1635 Age : 25 Location : In my current location. Current Mood : Tired x-x Fun Quote : Do not walk behind me, for I may not lead. Do not walk ahead of me, for I may not follow. Do not walk beside me either. Just pretty much leave me alone. Warning Level :
| Subject: Re: Sceinic's NEW poetry Sat Sep 04, 2010 9:47 pm | |
| Untold Pathways
My heart is locked away, Protected by a clouding mist.
So close, but unable to grasp. My feelings feel so unclear.
The wrath of a friend, now forced to by my enemy, I miss the friendship we all shared.
But as feelings mold, and the mist swirls less and less..
New feelings change the way I live, and sacrifices must be made.
Though as I think, It becomes worthwhile.
For the new way I think, For the new way I feel.
Lately, I've been choked, unable to speak my heart...
But this poem lets my express myself the confusion and the lies.
A friend who has become less, and a friend who has become more.
Though my life has become confusing, with all it's twists and turns..
Dawn light shines on new pathways, and warms my cold chills. | |
|
| |
Rhys the Porcupine Legendary Member
Registration date : 2010-01-27 Number of posts : 3704 Age : 29 Location : Tree house Current Mood : Happy Fun Quote : I never give up, no matter what happens! Warning Level :
| Subject: Re: Sceinic's NEW poetry Sat Sep 04, 2010 9:51 pm | |
| | |
|
| |
PikaScein Adventurer
Registration date : 2009-06-13 Number of posts : 1635 Age : 25 Location : In my current location. Current Mood : Tired x-x Fun Quote : Do not walk behind me, for I may not lead. Do not walk ahead of me, for I may not follow. Do not walk beside me either. Just pretty much leave me alone. Warning Level :
| Subject: Re: Sceinic's NEW poetry Sat Sep 04, 2010 9:53 pm | |
| Thanks. It was a short poem I made in 5 minutes. | |
|
| |
Charmy the Bee Rookie
Registration date : 2009-05-31 Number of posts : 66 Age : 29 Location : New Jersey Current Mood : Tired. Fun Quote : Too bored. Warning Level :
| Subject: Re: Sceinic's NEW poetry Sun Sep 05, 2010 8:33 am | |
| POTATO SUNDAE.
There. Now post. >.>. | |
|
| |
PikaScein Adventurer
Registration date : 2009-06-13 Number of posts : 1635 Age : 25 Location : In my current location. Current Mood : Tired x-x Fun Quote : Do not walk behind me, for I may not lead. Do not walk ahead of me, for I may not follow. Do not walk beside me either. Just pretty much leave me alone. Warning Level :
| Subject: Re: Sceinic's NEW poetry Sun Sep 05, 2010 8:37 am | |
| Hmmmmmm. *lightbulb*
Potato Sundae I like my Potato Sundae, with raw onions and cheese, lightly salted, and made to please.
Now this poem, was inspired by the post above. So if you want quality poetry.. Don't spam, cause this is what you made me think of. | |
|
| |
Charmy the Bee Rookie
Registration date : 2009-05-31 Number of posts : 66 Age : 29 Location : New Jersey Current Mood : Tired. Fun Quote : Too bored. Warning Level :
| Subject: Re: Sceinic's NEW poetry Sun Sep 05, 2010 8:38 am | |
|
You insult my nature of potato sundaes? I shall now commend you.
-claps-
| |
|
| |
PikaScein Adventurer
Registration date : 2009-06-13 Number of posts : 1635 Age : 25 Location : In my current location. Current Mood : Tired x-x Fun Quote : Do not walk behind me, for I may not lead. Do not walk ahead of me, for I may not follow. Do not walk beside me either. Just pretty much leave me alone. Warning Level :
| Subject: Re: Sceinic's NEW poetry Sun Sep 05, 2010 8:39 am | |
| | |
|
| |
Sponsored content
| Subject: Re: Sceinic's NEW poetry | |
| |
|
| |
| Sceinic's NEW poetry | |
|