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PostSubject: Swiftstar's Lifestory.   Sun Jul 25, 2010 5:08 am

PROLOGUE *Note: This is based off of me, Comet, Orbit, and Glace's actual roleplay*

Swiftstar padded slowly through the forest, weakened by many days hunger. She was on her last life, and if she lost this one, she would join Starclan. She flicked her ear in acknowledgment as Blazeheart padded up to her. "Swiftstar... I need to tell you something." Swiftstar turned to look at the golden tom. "Yes, Blazeheart?" She croaked. Blazeheart flinched at the tiredness in her eyes, but forced himself to continue. "Starclan sent me a dream. Me, Orboclaw and Icebelly were laying dead with the rest of Pineclan, and do you know was standing over them? YOU!" Swiftstar sighed. "I'm sorry Blazeheart, but I won't... be alive.. for that to happen." Blazeheart closed his eyes for several moments, then curled up and lay beside her. "No one could have asked for a better friend." He paused. "Alright, no more hunting for you. Let's just try to get back to camp." Swiftstar closed her eyes. "Pineclan will prevail more than it ever has under new leadership. You are ready, Blazeheart." As Blazeheart let out a low wail, Swiftstar gave away to the starry darkness and her warrior ancestors.
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PostSubject: Re: Swiftstar's Lifestory.   Sun Jul 25, 2010 7:04 am

What the heck? That didn't make an inch of sense.
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PostSubject: Re: Swiftstar's Lifestory.   Sun Jul 25, 2010 7:07 am

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What the heck? That didn't make an inch of sense.
It's based off of a book. I think...
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PostSubject: Re: Swiftstar's Lifestory.   Sun Jul 25, 2010 7:13 am

If it is, she should have mentioned that.
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PostSubject: Re: Swiftstar's Lifestory.   Sun Jul 25, 2010 7:26 am

Something called "Warriors" or some crap.
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PostSubject: Re: Swiftstar's Lifestory.   Sun Jul 25, 2010 9:43 am

What The hell is this?

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PostSubject: Re: Swiftstar's Lifestory.   Sun Jul 25, 2010 11:39 am

It's the prolouge, which shows how Swiftstar dies. If you read Bluestar's prophecy; you would understand. When I write Chapter 1, It will show her as a kit. I plan to make chapters 1-6 kithood, 7-12 apprenticeship, 13- 35 warrior, 36- 45 deputyship, 45- death leadership.
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PostSubject: Re: Swiftstar's Lifestory.   Sun Jul 25, 2010 12:14 pm

What in the world did you just say? Can you....I dunno....elaborate?
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PostSubject: Re: Swiftstar's Lifestory.   Mon Jul 26, 2010 1:25 am

First of all, who the heck is Swiftstar? If you want anyone to understand what you're talking about, you have to elaborate and explain first.
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PostSubject: Re: Swiftstar's Lifestory.   Mon Jul 26, 2010 2:02 am

You see, it's a PROLOGUE. When I start with chapter 1; you still won't know her, but you'll GET to know her. Have you ever opened up a book and seen a character profile?
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PostSubject: Re: Swiftstar's Lifestory.   Mon Jul 26, 2010 4:18 am

Sceinic, they're right. Most all users here don't know what the heck you're talking about, majorly because you barely (if at all) described what this prologue is based off of, who the character's roleplayers are, what series the FC's are based from, and what the heck, who are the characters that you didn't describe? In this case, the base series are Warrior Cats. But you didn't explain, causing confusion.
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PostSubject: Re: Swiftstar's Lifestory.   Mon Jul 26, 2010 4:37 am

I didn't say you had to put a character profile in the story. I don't care if you want suspense or whatever, you have to explain something. Really. You can never just jump into a story like that.
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PostSubject: Re: Swiftstar's Lifestory.   Mon Jul 26, 2010 4:55 am

That's what I meant, Speedy.
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PostSubject: Re: Swiftstar's Lifestory.   Mon Jul 26, 2010 4:58 am

Did you open up Bluestar's Prophecy and see a description of Bluestar? NO
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PostSubject: Re: Swiftstar's Lifestory.   Mon Jul 26, 2010 5:03 am

-_- You don't understand what I'm saying.......PEOPLE WHO READ BLUESTAR'S PROPHECY HAVE READ THE FIRST WARRIOR BOOK, I assure you. They know who Bluestar is. THESE GUYS HAVEN'T RPed WIT US, so they don't know.
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PostSubject: Re: Swiftstar's Lifestory.   Mon Jul 26, 2010 7:01 am

There's another thing. What the heck is Bluestar's Prophecy?
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PostSubject: Re: Swiftstar's Lifestory.   Mon Jul 26, 2010 7:22 am

Speedy the Hedgehog wrote:
There's another thing. What the heck is Bluestar's Prophecy?
What the Toilet Princess said.
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